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Cutting
The blade
Escape
Afraid
Release
The fear
Unwanted
A tear
The cuts
The shame
Your body
The frame
Complete
Without
Perfection
And doubt
Your life
The pain
The slices
In vain
The scars
The hiding
In corners
The dying
The harm
The black
The terror
A crack
The blood
The veins
Droplets
It rains
The hurt
The bleeding
Disguise
Misleading
Cutting
The blade
Escape
Afraid
cutting
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LostinFragility Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
This is so intense. I can physically feel the poem as if it were speaking to me. Great job <3
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IMA-BANANA Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
this made me happy because it rhymed.
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Rainbow-Bunnii Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Why does this not have more comments!? It's beautiful, I love how it's just one or two words on each line.
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Black-Rose9857 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I like it. Its true.
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TheBigSplash Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Student General Artist
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amandapanda112 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
shut the fuck up
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obviouslyblue Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
this is amazing!!!
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a35sa Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011
That's so amazing!Thank you for that!
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xXtragedystrikesXx Featured By Owner May 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. That was written beautifully. It really races through your mind and delivers the core of the issue. This is amazing. Kudos to you, my friend.
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